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O is for One
This was my entry for Microcosms Fiction on 27 January. The original prompt was:
We spun, and our three elements are – character: Convict, setting: Chicago, and genre: Romance
It didn’t really inspire me, so I pressed the “spin button” and got a new prompt:
Character: Architect/ setting: Skyscraper/ genre: Crime
One Step Closer
By Ronel Janse van Vuuren
His tie escaped its clip and slapped Michael in the face. The wind was picking up ferocity where he stood on the roof, watching his creation forlornly.
‘You can’t stop this.’
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So, who do you think? Did you like the twist ending? Though I’m a fantasy writer, I like to stretch my writing-muscles on occasion and write something else: did this suit the crime-genre? I listened to Linkin Park while writing this – their greatest hits always seem to get the creativity going.
The judge’s favourite line: It was the voice that had coerced him to design this monstrosity.
I always appreciate feedback, so don’t hesitate to comment.
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nickimags @ The Secret Library said:
Great twist!
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miladyronel said:
Thank you 🙂
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Karine O said:
Ahhh that had me on the edge of my seat! Love your writing!
O is for Open Letter
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miladyronel said:
Thank you 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
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C.D. Gallant-King said:
Great twist. So much going on in such a short snippet. I wanted more info!
O – The October Crisis
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miladyronel said:
Thank you 🙂
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Tamara Narayan said:
Stephanie was the crime boss? That is unexpected. I was wondering for a moment how in the heck Michael’s finance’ was standing there listening to all this and fell, but I think I’ve got it now.
O is for Owl Worship
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miladyronel said:
I’m glad the twist worked 🙂
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Keith's Ramblings said:
…nothing more than a speck of red. A chilling end to a gripping tale.
Amble Bay’s Orchestra
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miladyronel said:
Thanks, Keith 🙂 I’m glad my foray into another genre is working.
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Jacqui Murray said:
Edgy story–nicely told. Now I’m off to recover.
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miladyronel said:
Thanks, Jacqui 🙂
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Nick Wilford said:
Wow – very intense. Loved the twist!
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miladyronel said:
Thanks, Nick 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
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saracsnider said:
Well, that’s a bummer. For some reason, this story gave me a Daredevil vibe. 😉 I enjoyed it!
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miladyronel said:
Thanks, Sara 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
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jazzfeathers said:
WOW! i didnt’ expect that twist.
Well done 😉
@JazzFeathers
The Old Shelter – 1940s Film Noir
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miladyronel said:
Thank you 🙂
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Anne J. said:
Haha! I’m slow. I was wondering where Stephanie came from. I felt bad that she died. Then you said something about twist. I scrolled back up and re-read the last lines. The end wasn’t so sad anymore. But… Ah, they could have ruled side by side… criminals but ruled. 🙂 Great story to the prompt.
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miladyronel said:
Thanks, Anne 🙂
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