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C is for Calling.
For those new to my blog: I publish a flash fiction piece every Tuesday. Usually it’s something I’ve entered into one of the weekly flash fiction competitions I like to use to sharpen my skills.
This was my entry for Microcosms Fiction on 20 January. The prompt was:
Song title: Good Morning Good Morning
Genre: Fairy Tale
I had to use the spin option to get a new prompt – the original just wasn’t inspiring me.
“Our contest this week begins with just TWO things: song title and genre.
We spun, and our two elements are – song title: Being for the Benefit of Mr Kite!, and genre: Horror”
Calling It
By Ronel Janse van Vuuren
Several maidens danced over the meadow, singing good morning to each other and everyone they passed. The birds joined in and it became the noisiest early morning the wolf had had in a very long time.
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Twenty-four flash fiction tales filled with folklore and mythology, creeping in on the edges of nightmares, and twisting around the various sub-genres of fantasy.
I really liked the idea of taking the usual fairy tale tropes and turning it on its head. And, I know some people have found it confusing, “calling it” is a reference to calling the time of death… Yes: the bacon is a reference to the three little pigs 😉
Judge’s favourite line: His right eye ticked, the ear-plugs had stopped working by the time the fourth maiden had opened her mouth and all the bacon in the world couldn’t make him feel better.
What do you think of this story? Do you write flash fiction?
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I was a bit confused at first reading, but after finding your notes and reading it again it turned into a brilliant little tale! I love to write flash fiction, often several stories each a day. Fun isn’t it?
Today in Amble Bay!
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Thanks, Keith 🙂 Flash fiction is awesome.
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That was my favorite line too! Very creative. Grumpy old wolf…lol How many words did you have? If you have a few more to spare, it would have been lovely to add a brief couple of words about their hair catching the light of the sun, and blinding the wolf too…or their dresses maybe sparkling in some way to make the wolf roll over…I really like where your mind went on this topic.
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Thanks, Erika. Your suggestions sound great 🙂
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I like the singing maidens and their over-the-top happiness and optimism. It’s a good contrast to the grumpy wolf. Flash fiction is fun, but difficult–for me, anyway–to write. I like to practice it from time to time, though. It’s a good way to exercise different writing muscles. 🙂
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Thanks, Sara 🙂 I’ve learned a lot about different writing techniques since I’ve started with this form. And still I have no idea what makes one flash fiction piece work and another fall flat 😉
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LOL! That was fun 🙂
I’m always in awe of people who can write such short stories.
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Thanks, Sarah 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
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Fun as always. ‘Enjoyed reading. Happy A to Z Juneta @ Writer’s Gambit
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Thanks, Juneta 🙂
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“…all the bacon in the world couldn’t make him feel better” is also my favourite (part of) a sentence in this story.
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Eva – Mail Adventures
C is for Castle.
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Thanks, Eva 🙂
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Loved this – seeing it from the wolf’s perspective. I write flash fiction too and it’s a real challenge condensing stories. I’ll be back!
@Raesquiggles from
The Quiet Writer
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Thank you 🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
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Liked that line, too – “His right eye ticked,” – you and language! Amazing!
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Thanks, Theresa 🙂
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I love it! Terrific! My kind of flash fiction. 🙂 It’s a horror I can handle. Poor maidens.
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Thanks, Anne 🙂 I’m glad you liked the story.
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Great work with this post! I enjoyed your story, and the “bacon” reference added in. Nice job.
J — Co-host the #AtoZchallenge, Debut Author Interviewer, Reference and Speculative Fiction Writer
http://jlennidornerblog.what-are-they.com
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Thank you 🙂
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